In my previous blog post, I talked about the fact your character should have two pain points in their life. A desire - an exterior, physical, goal to achieve or not in the course of your story. They also should have a need - an interior goal, a lesson they must learn to make their life better. How do you intertwine your character’s needs versus their desire, the things that motivate them, for maximum impact? Here are a few suggestions to consider. Conflict and Resolution:Infuse your screenplay with internal and external conflicts that challenge both the character's need and desire. Perhaps getting the bag of money puts their newfound relationship at risk. This creates a dynamic tension that keeps the audience engaged. Actions Speak Louder:Show, don't just tell. Instead of having characters blurt out their motivations, let their actions do the talking. A character sacrificing personal happiness for the well-being of others speaks volumes without a single word being uttered. Evolutionary Arc:Revealing Dialogue:Create dialogue that reveals glimpses of your characters' true motivations. Subtext is your best friend here. A casual conversation can carry layers of meaning that astute viewers will pick up on. Symbolic Motifs:Both the characters’ desire and need should be clear, at least to the audience, very early on. It’s what kicks the story off, so don’t fill the first ten pages of your script with a lot of backstory that doesn’t move the story forward. Tell us in flashback if you have to why they’re afraid of snakes. In “Raiders of the Lost Arc,” we didn’t know why Indy was afraid of snakes until the prequel TV series years later. Did it matter? No!
Sure, a lot of movies only operate on one level and do just fine. “Taken” is just about retrieving his daughter and financially it did just fine. I would argue the need, a better emotional connection with his daughter is there, just very subtle. But even the “Fast and Furious” movies are about the heist (desire) and learning that family is more important (need). Over and over again, but still.
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